The Ministry of Education announced that it will include more roles such as vloggers/digital marketers/e-sports players in the category of [Freelancer].
What do you think about it?
Is it good for your career choice or it will be a bigger challenge for you as there are more people getting involved in the competitive labour market?
英语:
练习区
Does this policy create any new job opportunities? No, it merely creates some beautiful statistical reports.
The policymakers will feel better about this and pretend that this year has no difference as in previous years.
It reminds of me that the peasants have not been included in unemployment statistics in China yet.
I feel quite angry and pity about them, for they dare not to face the problems.
But the problems still exist, and I do believe that the principal thing to solve a problem is to face it, admit it, and overcome it.
Totally agree. Well said and well done :))
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It reminds of [of 放到me后面]me
feel pity about [for] them
It merely creates some beautiful statistical reports.
"beautiful"可能会让人觉得是用visualization之类的方式让它看起来漂亮，你也可以更直接地说"manipulate data"。
Does this policy create any new job opportunities? No, it merely creates some manipulate data.
The policymakers will feel better about this and pretend that this year has no difference as in previous years.
It reminds me that the peasants have not been included in unemployment statistics in China yet.
I feel quite angry and pity for them, for they dare not to face the problems.
But the problems still exist, and I do believe that the principal thing to solve a problem is to face it, admit it, and overcome it.
It merely create manipulate [它是动词噢所以注意一下用法] data---> It merely manipulates data.
其他完美~
Agree with BIGray.This is a decision made by the Ministry of Education without a solution.
Perfect~
大家可以多互相点评，玩起来 [doge]
As COVID-19 is sweeping the globe, the China's economic situation is very grim. A lot of people have lost their jobs and have no incomes. So the government advocates the development of land-sharing economy and now stall mania is sweeping the country. But stalling is not a panacea. So for graduating students, they could start their careers with gaming, opening online stores, creating self-media's. This is also a very helpless thing.
Another positive opinion, and well explained! :))
But I'm not sure about what the "stall mania" means...
好多词用得蛮好的，学到了~
一些小建议：
self-media's [去掉‘s]
helpless thing[我感觉是不是想说没办法的办法？可以说"They're just clutching at straws(死马当活马医)/There is no better choice"]
Thank you!
"stall mania" 是地摊儿热，类似的说法有：football mania ,世界杯来的时候，全球都会有个足球热。
Thanks!
These new careers are the results of the social development. It doesn't matter whether they‘re official or not. As for the good thing, these careers may become more acceptable for the elders.
The first positive opinion! You've made your point.
没有什么问题啦，就是基本没有"as for the good thing"的说法，可以直接"the good thing is,+句子"。
These new careers are the results of the social development. It doesn't matter whether they're official or not. The good thing is, these careers may become more acceptable for the elders.
再来一遍，加深印象。感谢批阅~
The news implies that more and more graduate students choose to become a vlogger, an online shop owner, or a self-media publisher. I think this is good news. I am glad to see that people can choose a different lifestyle without being misjudged.
Does this news have any influence on me? Not at all.
Because I am old enough to not trust news and I am also too old to compete with those young guys.
I think this is （后面加一个a，news在这里是不可数名词单数，表示新闻）good news
而且你不老啦哈哈哈，只是你更理性而已
You are still young with your heart as you keep learning English and new things!
There is nothing to change but make the official employment report to looks better.
That's all.
You know well how the game is played 👍
make the report to [去掉] looks [look] better, 也可以写成"Nothing changes but makes the national employment report look better."
I think generally both freelancers and business starters are not for graduates. Freelancers are people who are very professional in some certain fields and they can easily get such kind of job, so they decide not to work for a company but in a more flexible way. For business starters, normally they need to deal with Human Resources, financial management and business conducting. In today‘s environment, many companies are struggling to survive, it’s not easy to start a new company.
Apparently, the policy makers want a self- deceiving report.
The last sentence deserves 👍👍
I think generally both freelancers and business starters are not [good choices] for graduates.
Human Resources [建议小写，主要是为了和后面统一]
in today's environment[建议删掉改成 these days,+后面的句子/直接用Today, +后面句子]
Great job！
Agree with BIGray and 沈东生(Rick).
This is more like to increase the employment rate data, forcibly added these categories.
This is more like to increase the employment rate data[可以不用data], forcibly added these categories[这个主语和前面的这句不是同一个，最好加个"government"。感觉有点中式表达，你看看下面改的会不会更好一点点？].
more like + n. 所以可以考虑改成 "more like an approach to..."
Forcibly adding these categories is more like an approach for the government to increase the employment rate.