英语如何写好英文邮件—老板我就是要换工作(2)-离开的原因-英文练习贴19

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Let's deal with the body part (i) today.

Tell your manager about your decision and the reason for it.

告诉经理你的决定和原因。注意,今天只写body段1。

这样设计的理由是大家可以在动笔前思考怎么在一段内组织你的信息,既简洁又有条理。
一步一步练习~

大家可以自己丰富细节(现实/编造都可以),但注意避免信息过载。

请在 4 句 话 内完成,简洁而清晰是关键。

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3 个月前沈东生(Rick)

The reason for me to leave is that I have found a remote job recently. I will be well paid and will have a more flexible schedule to balance work and life.
Besides, the salary is settled in dollars; It will give me a chance to invest in the U.S. stock market.

语法上没问题的,用词上"the salary is settled[没有看到这样的用法,最好用 is paid ]"。注意到要避免句子粘连很好!不过It首字母要小写,可能是不小心打错了吧。
内容上来说,应该不太需要讲到投资国外证券市场那么细 (?) 一般如果要解释原因有几个方向可以选,都是无伤大雅又万能的,比如你这里提到的生活方式和家庭。所以不妨就只谈这一点,可以参考下面的内容:
I’m resigning due to personal reasons./I have accepted a new opportunity that gives me a chance to continue to grow professionally, as well as stay close to my family.
当然如果从实际情况考虑,说什么理由都是由自己判断啦,只要认为是不卑不亢是很难让人觉得不妥的辞职理由其实都可以。

3 个月前沈东生(Rick)

The reason for me to leave is that I have found a remote job recently. I will be well paid and will have a more flexible schedule to balance work and life.
Besides, the salary is paid in dollars; it will give me a chance to invest in the U.S. stock market.

3 个月前君君

The reason for me to leave is that I want to start my own company that I have dreamed for years. I need to get it done before I am too old.

Well said!
有别的梦想/职业规划改变都是挺好的理由。

3 个月前金木歌

Dear Sir,
Wish you had a nice weekend, after thorough consideration, I have decide to leave this wonderful team, I'm sorry it's time to say goodbye to you.

Because I like Shanghai very much and I have always wanted to live in Shanghai, now I think all things are ready, I will go to Shanghai in several days.

now I think...I will go句子粘连了噢,上一个帖子也出现过,一定要引起重视啦。
两个独立句子中间要用句号隔开,或者使用分号和连词
这里有什么不明白的欢迎在群里@我,我会发更详细的解释。
这个理由也是可以的,移居的表达推荐:
I will relocate to the ZYX area in the near future/several days.

3 个月前谷雨

I have moved to the downtown, it takes much time on commute every day. So I decided to look for a job nearer to home and the new job was settled down recently.

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

Very good expression! Keep up the good work!

3 个月前欧耶山哥

I have been working here for five years and I feel it is difficult to improve my ability and salary. So I want to see the outside world.

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

I feel it is difficult to improve my ability and (加上increase my,涨工资的固定说法,或者raise my salary)salary.
So I want to see(可以用explore探索,前后句意可能更贴切) the outside world.我想探索外部的世界的意思吗?

建议重新抄写一遍印象更深哦

3 个月前欧耶山哥

Thank you!

I have been working here for five years and I feel it is difficult to improve my ability and increase my salary. So I want to explore the outside world.