英语被逼无奈,开始学写英文邮件,吐槽使我进步,都来拍砖

BIGray
219阅读21评论9 个月前

作为一枚深居国内的土鳖,英文水平的巅峰时期应该就是高考之前记得哪些单词和题目了,之后就是各种荒废。

直到最近,因为社区开始更海外有些交集,and,我也计划去国外骑行一条渴望已久的线路,是时候把英文捡起来了。先从最基本的英文邮件开始吧。

我知道社区的很多同学都在默默学英文,就干脆把我自己摸索写的邮件发出来,让老司机多多指点,其他人一起参考,一起进步。

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9 个月前spicru2

大灰方便贴一下全文出来不,我帮你提点修改意见

9 个月前spicru2

这样 我试试在图片上加评论

当然。贴出来就是希望得到指点的。

9 个月前spicru2

好,正在线上开会,开完给你 comments

Hi,man!


It’s  BIGray here, from eleduck.com.


From your replies bellow this post https://eleduck.com/posts/M82fko,

I learned about that you want to find someone to make your English CV better.


And I can recommend a friend named Jessie Wang ,she is a Chinese who works as HR in a  IT company based on Canada.

And she usually help some Chinese people find some  better job chances,though polishing their resumes and improving interview.And you can learn more about her by this:https://eleduck.com/posts/PwwfQ7


You can get her Email or WeChat from me if you want.

.

FYI.

Look forward to your reply.


Regards,

BIGray

9 个月前spicru2

首先,基于我的经验和水平,给出了如上的 comments,咱们就可以理解为这是一次 code review 😉


想要让英文写作看起来更专业更优雅,抛几个我的观点:

1. 注意英文标点的使用,一般标点后都要加一个空格,但也不能打俩个空格,并且一定避免在英文写作里出现中文标点。
2. DRY - Do Not Repeat Yourself 跟写代码一下,尽量不使用重复的词语和句型。

3. 言简意赅,不添加多余的词汇。

4. 写完之后,通读一遍,double check 一般自己都会发现问题。

5. 借助语法工具如 Grammarly 谷歌插件快速检查写作错误。

👍这个是code review的工具不

9 个月前spicru2

Xnip,为了方便的标注,刚刚买了会员版,哈哈

9 个月前蕾咪io

新工具 get

9 个月前波派

找大灰报销🤣

9 个月前spicru2

既然是给我的邮件,我也好好回了一下 ,其中包含了我修改了大灰的版本,读者可以通读一下大概在哪些地方有变化,在右侧可以看到 Grammarly 检测显示正确性、清晰度、衔接性、讲话方式都没有问题。

这是我在回复邮件的过程中,Grammarly 强大的语调检测,发现了我的语气是很 appreciative 的,说明整篇文字的论调是偏向于感谢,而不是中立、愤怒之类的,语调分析有助于在不同场景下更换作者的写作风格。

补充一下我常用的几个工具:

目前我在外企纯英文环境下做前端开发,

未来有机会我再开一篇帖子给大家讲讲我的英语学习经历。

哥们你太热心了,充电感谢。今天的指导非常用心有价值。
为了以后能出国骑行,这是我必须要迈过的一道坎。
从今天开始,每天坚持英文写作,从邮件开始。
期待你的分享,相信能帮到社区的很多人。

9 个月前ElmerZhang

Grammarly 是个好东西,如果常用英文写东西的话建议买个 Premium

这两者的区别是?能讲讲么?

9 个月前ElmerZhang

就是会员啦,免费版只能简单检测语法和拼写,会员版还能提供可读性和书写习惯的建议

9 个月前波派

Grammarly 我也买了会员,现在写git commit message和comments都用

9 个月前young

我这个学渣竟然看懂了80%的内容。

纠正个错别字

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原文:直到最近,因为社区开始海外有些交集

我想应该是【跟】吧,可见当时心情有多激动,优质帖,充电支持。

9 个月前啊雷

每次下定决心学英语到最后都草草了事了 这次和灰哥一起努力哦!冲!

7 个月前Lan

Grammarly 确实不错!在公司写邮件outlook也是自动检查,老板也建议员工都装上。

Btw, if you are interested! I am based in Canada, and I help job seekers or recent graduates on their resumes and cover letters. I also have expertise in interview preparation and mock interviews. Let me know if that's something you want help on, and I am more than happy to help! 主要是对加拿大/北美的面试准备以及简历修改比较有经验。如果有有什么能够帮到你欢迎联系!:)

Cheers, Lan

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7 个月前Jercy Lew

Bellow is my comments based on my previous working experiences at a US company, it still may not be the perfect one, but I hope it can help you, also I will be happy to learn together with anyone here. Also you can contact me if you want me to do something for you, Thanks!

Hi,man!
Hello, Mr/Ms xxx

It’s  BIGray here, from eleduck.com.
I hope you are doing well today, this is BigGray from eleduck.com

From your replies bellow this post https://eleduck.com/posts/M82fko,
I learned about that you want to find someone to make your English CV better.
Thanks a lot for your kind and prompt reply for the post https://eleduck.com/posts/M82fko, where I learnt that you are looking for someone to improve your English CV

And I can recommend a friend named Jessie Wang ,she is a Chinese who works as HR in a  IT company based on Canada.
And she usually help some Chinese people find some  better job chances,though polishing their resumes and improving interview.And you can learn more about her by this:https://eleduck.com/posts/PwwfQ7

And here I would like to recommend my friend Jessie Wang, a Chinese HR working for a IT company based in Canada, who usually helps some Chinese job hunters find better job opportunities, enhance their resumes as well as prepare interviews. you can learn more about her herehttps://eleduck.com/posts/PwwfQ7

You can get her Email or WeChat from me if you want.
I can give you her Email and Wechat if you want, should you have any questions please immediately let me know.

.

FYI.
No need FYI here

Look forward to your reply.
Looking forward to your reply/Looking forward to hearing from you

Regards,

BIGray