作为一枚深居国内的土鳖，英文水平的巅峰时期应该就是高考之前记得哪些单词和题目了，之后就是各种荒废。
直到最近，因为社区开始更海外有些交集，and，我也计划去国外骑行一条渴望已久的线路，是时候把英文捡起来了。先从最基本的英文邮件开始吧。
我知道社区的很多同学都在默默学英文，就干脆把我自己摸索写的邮件发出来，让老司机多多指点，其他人一起参考，一起进步。
英语:
练习区
电鸭是国内最早的远程工作社区。我们倡导“只工作，不上班”的生活方式，努力推动多样化工作方式在国内的渐进式发展。
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电鸭是国内最早的远程工作社区。我们倡导“只工作，不上班”的生活方式，努力推动多样化工作方式在国内的渐进式发展。
既然是给我的邮件，我也好好回了一下 ，其中包含了我修改了大灰的版本，读者可以通读一下大概在哪些地方有变化，在右侧可以看到 Grammarly 检测显示正确性、清晰度、衔接性、讲话方式都没有问题。
这是我在回复邮件的过程中，Grammarly 强大的语调检测，发现了我的语气是很 appreciative 的，说明整篇文字的论调是偏向于感谢，而不是中立、愤怒之类的，语调分析有助于在不同场景下更换作者的写作风格。
补充一下我常用的几个工具：
目前我在外企纯英文环境下做前端开发，
未来有机会我再开一篇帖子给大家讲讲我的英语学习经历。
哥们你太热心了，充电感谢。今天的指导非常用心有价值。
为了以后能出国骑行，这是我必须要迈过的一道坎。
从今天开始，每天坚持英文写作，从邮件开始。
期待你的分享，相信能帮到社区的很多人。
首先，基于我的经验和水平，给出了如上的 comments，咱们就可以理解为这是一次 code review 😉
想要让英文写作看起来更专业更优雅，抛几个我的观点：
1. 注意英文标点的使用，一般标点后都要加一个空格，但也不能打俩个空格，并且一定避免在英文写作里出现中文标点。
2. DRY - Do Not Repeat Yourself 跟写代码一下，尽量不使用重复的词语和句型。
3. 言简意赅，不添加多余的词汇。
4. 写完之后，通读一遍，double check 一般自己都会发现问题。
5. 借助语法工具如 Grammarly 谷歌插件快速检查写作错误。
👍这个是code review的工具不
Xnip，为了方便的标注，刚刚买了会员版，哈哈
新工具 get
找大灰报销🤣
Grammarly 是个好东西，如果常用英文写东西的话建议买个 Premium
这两者的区别是？能讲讲么？
就是会员啦，免费版只能简单检测语法和拼写，会员版还能提供可读性和书写习惯的建议
大灰方便贴一下全文出来不，我帮你提点修改意见
这样 我试试在图片上加评论
当然。贴出来就是希望得到指点的。
好，正在线上开会，开完给你 comments
Grammarly 我也买了会员，现在写git commit message和comments都用
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我这个学渣竟然看懂了80%的内容。
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原文：直到最近，因为社区开始更海外有些交集
我想应该是【跟】吧，可见当时心情有多激动，优质帖，充电支持。
每次下定决心学英语到最后都草草了事了 这次和灰哥一起努力哦！冲！
Grammarly 确实不错！在公司写邮件outlook也是自动检查，老板也建议员工都装上。
Btw, if you are interested! I am based in Canada, and I help job seekers or recent graduates on their resumes and cover letters. I also have expertise in interview preparation and mock interviews. Let me know if that's something you want help on, and I am more than happy to help! 主要是对加拿大/北美的面试准备以及简历修改比较有经验。如果有有什么能够帮到你欢迎联系！：）
Cheers, Lan
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Bellow is my comments based on my previous working experiences at a US company, it still may not be the perfect one, but I hope it can help you, also I will be happy to learn together with anyone here. Also you can contact me if you want me to do something for you, Thanks!
Hi,man!
Hello, Mr/Ms xxx
It’s BIGray here, from eleduck.com.
I hope you are doing well today, this is BigGray from eleduck.com
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I learned about that you want to find someone to make your English CV better.
Thanks a lot for your kind and prompt reply for the post https://eleduck.com/posts/M82fko, where I learnt that you are looking for someone to improve your English CV
And I can recommend a friend named Jessie Wang ，she is a Chinese who works as HR in a IT company based on Canada.
And she usually help some Chinese people find some better job chances,though polishing their resumes and improving interview.And you can learn more about her by this:https://eleduck.com/posts/PwwfQ7
And here I would like to recommend my friend Jessie Wang, a Chinese HR working for a IT company based in Canada, who usually helps some Chinese job hunters find better job opportunities, enhance their resumes as well as prepare interviews. you can learn more about her herehttps://eleduck.com/posts/PwwfQ7
You can get her Email or WeChat from me if you want.
I can give you her Email and Wechat if you want, should you have any questions please immediately let me know.
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FYI.
No need FYI here
Look forward to your reply.
Looking forward to your reply/Looking forward to hearing from you
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