英语被逼无奈，开始学写英文邮件，吐槽使我进步，都来拍砖

既然是给我的邮件，我也好好回了一下 ，其中包含了我修改了大灰的版本，读者可以通读一下大概在哪些地方有变化，在右侧可以看到 Grammarly 检测显示正确性、清晰度、衔接性、讲话方式都没有问题。

这是我在回复邮件的过程中，Grammarly 强大的语调检测，发现了我的语气是很 appreciative 的，说明整篇文字的论调是偏向于感谢，而不是中立、愤怒之类的，语调分析有助于在不同场景下更换作者的写作风格。

补充一下我常用的几个工具：

• https://www.grammarly.com/ 语法检测，有 Chrome 插件和 Desktop App 版本
• https://english.stackexchange.com/ 英语使用者的问答网站，Stack Overflow 兄弟站点
• https://www.urbandictionary.com/ 城市词典，在这里能查到很多流行俚语，越懂俚语越贴近本地人的生活文化
• 欧路词典，目前电脑上装的唯一词典 app，Alt+Space 就能呼出它立即搜单词

目前我在外企纯英文环境下做前端开发，

未来有机会我再开一篇帖子给大家讲讲我的英语学习经历。

首先，基于我的经验和水平，给出了如上的 comments，咱们就可以理解为这是一次 code review 😉

想要让英文写作看起来更专业更优雅，抛几个我的观点：

1. 注意英文标点的使用，一般标点后都要加一个空格，但也不能打俩个空格，并且一定避免在英文写作里出现中文标点。
2. DRY - Do Not Repeat Yourself 跟写代码一下，尽量不使用重复的词语和句型。

3. 言简意赅，不添加多余的词汇。

4. 写完之后，通读一遍，double check 一般自己都会发现问题。

5. 借助语法工具如 Grammarly 谷歌插件快速检查写作错误。

Grammarly 是个好东西，如果常用英文写东西的话建议买个 Premium

大灰方便贴一下全文出来不，我帮你提点修改意见

Grammarly 我也买了会员，现在写git commit message和comments都用

Grammarly 确实不错！在公司写邮件outlook也是自动检查，老板也建议员工都装上。

Btw, if you are interested! I am based in Canada, and I help job seekers or recent graduates on their resumes and cover letters. I also have expertise in interview preparation and mock interviews. Let me know if that's something you want help on, and I am more than happy to help! 主要是对加拿大/北美的面试准备以及简历修改比较有经验。如果有有什么能够帮到你欢迎联系！：）

Cheers, Lan

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我这个学渣竟然看懂了80%的内容。

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原文：直到最近，因为社区开始更海外有些交集

我想应该是【跟】吧，可见当时心情有多激动，优质帖，充电支持。

每次下定决心学英语到最后都草草了事了 这次和灰哥一起努力哦！冲！