英语如何写好英文邮件—老板我就是要换工作!(4)-英文练习贴21

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Finally, today we're going to finish our email. Congratulations!

最后的挑战是完成这封邮件的结尾,通常需要对对方表示感谢,也可以适当客套。

别忘了落款和署名。请大家在 2 句 内 完成结尾。

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3 个月前君君

It's my honor to work with you and I really enjoy working here. Although it’s time to say goodbye, I wish we can always keep in touch.

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

Good Job!
这段写得很好,如果加上末尾的署名就更赞!
可以在最后这个完整邮件帖子里把以前的内容合并完整哦:
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很不错的结束语!欢迎在今天的复盘练习中带上结尾的署名。

3 个月前沈东生(Rick)

Thank you for your assistance in this matter and I wish we could be good friends from now on.

Yours sincerely.
Rick
wideunique@163.com

不错的结尾~但是注意署名结尾Yours sincerely, 👈逗号噢
还有邮箱的地址一般不用放在最后的。如果是正式信函可能会有其他格式,但通常不需要在末尾额外标注邮箱地址。
今天会有邮件的整体复盘,可以再看看tips。

3 个月前沈东生(Rick)

Thank you for your assistance in this matter and I wish we could be good friends from now on.

Yours sincerely,
Rick

3 个月前欧耶山哥

Thank you for your care. I will remember it forever. Please teach me when I encounter difficult questions.

Best Wishes!
Cooper

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

Please(用「I will very appreciate if you can」更加顺畅,表达另一种比较委婉和礼貌的请别人帮忙的感觉,please在这里有点乞求的意思,在邮件中使用不太正式) teach me when I encounter difficult questions.
欢迎重新写一遍这句话+在这帖子把你之前写得内容汇总复习一下呀
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态度很恳切,不过用语上可以稍微换一换。比如可以说: I really appreciate the time working with you; your experience has helped me so much. It will be really nice if I can still contact you when facing some problems/questions related in our field...
也欢迎其他小伙伴分享更好的表达。

3 个月前欧耶山哥

Thank you!

3 个月前欧耶山哥

Thank you!

3 个月前谷雨

Thanks for all the good memories my team brings to me. I will miss you guys all the time.
Contact me through the following information if need be.
WeChat: xxx
Email: xx@xx.com

Contact me through the following information if [needed].
也是一种很不错的方式,也能体现出你乐意提供支持的态度,well done!
可以在今天的复盘帖看看tips顺便练习一下署名~

3 个月前金木歌

Things have been very good here. I wish you promoting to a higher position.
Best regards.
Muge

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

I wish you promoting to a higher position.
可以用I wish you could promote me to a higher position. 表达更完整,把谁+动作+什么+对谁做等要素补充完整。

欢迎重新写一遍这句话+在这帖子把你之前写得内容汇总复习一下呀
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嗯愿望特别令人高兴,不过其实也不用这么讲啦哈哈。可以看看群里发的复盘tips,里面有一些推荐的模板,不需要背下来或照抄,但是可以学习一下句子。
单说句子语法 I wish you could get a promotion. 注意wish的用法以及get a promotion就不用加 a higher position 了,不然会赘余。

3 个月前烨烨Yeye

邮件的署名和前缀应用

3 个月前Ivan一万

Thanks for all the kindness and favors I have got from you and other workmates. I wish the company will develop better in the future sincerely.
Goodbye!
Ivan Zeng
Jul.12.2020

Thanks for all the kindness and favors you and other colleagues have given to me[感觉这样更顺些,供参考]. I wich the company[直接加愿望] develop better in the future [不需要在这里加sincerely].
邮件署名注意是:
Yours sincerely,
[your name]
不需要加日期
具体请参考群里的复盘pdf和最新的练习帖。